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Sonnet II from Stupid Sonnets

Her granite-black streets soaked

mist abound at every gutter

floating above sidewalks, boots and cloaks,

coffee brews and voices mutter.

Gothic shadows wake from dreams

of European romances and Rioja wine,

oak-tree hems and tram-track seams,

regular rhythms and sporadic rhyme.

Lime and lemongrass emanate from little Bourke lanes,

beats and riffs pulse underground

through dark hours the warmth remains

she holds my hand and walks me ’round.

She holds my heart, delivers her poetry

and inspires mine – Melbourne, my obsidian city.

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3 Responses

  1. Obsidian muttering thoughts
    Darkening, cloak my playful mood
    These streets on which I careless, sought
    To feed a soul, a body, food
    Sustaining all these rueful days
    Of remaining sameness installed
    With care in the will to engage
    In simplest routines recalled
    Time’s severely said remonstrance
    Echoing true where motionless
    A preeminent permanence
    Defines life’s boundaries unless
    Change becomes a potent token
    And by change the chain is broken.

    April 7, 2011 at 12:23 am

    • Oh no. You did not just outsonnet me on my own sonnet entry!

      April 7, 2011 at 3:45 am

  2. You mean to say that my sonnet is actually more stupid than yours? Please. That simply cannot be. I am honored and humbled, fellow crazy poet.

    April 7, 2011 at 9:57 am

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