There’s steam rising from the streets

She had too much to drink

clouds pour so much love

the swollen, pregnant Yarra

This entry was posted on November 2, 2010 by taramokhtari. It was filed under Uncategorized and was tagged with Melbourne, rain, steam, Yarra River.

Jess Killmenow

Lovely. I love the picture of the river, like a goddess pregnant with herself, and the title, such a vivid image, too.

November 2, 2010 at 9:26 am

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oliver

one syllable short of a haiku, but lovely nonetheless. why did you move to sydney? what do you think of marieke hardy?

January 11, 2011 at 3:26 am

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- taramokhtari
  
  The haiku is divided into “on”, which loosely translates to “syllable”. Is this one “on” short of a haiku? I couldn’t tell you for sure!
  Which tabloid says I’ve moved to Sydney??? Who are you, anyway??!
  I have no opinion of Marieke Hardy. Isn’t she just another glorified media personality?
  
  January 11, 2011 at 3:50 am
  
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